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fic: Late Arrival (221b ficlet)


Title: Late Arrival

Author: fengirl88

Warnings: explicit sexual content and themes.

Rating: NC17 

Word count: 221

Summary: PWP. A jealous John can't imagine what Sherlock sees in Lestrade. Or can he?

Prompted by late-night discussion with capt_spork  on the difficulty of writing sex scenes and the inspiring bad!assitude of Lestrade in ASIP. Spoilers for that, technically.

Disclaimers: I do not own these versions of these characters. Or that scene. Sadly. Icon by eumelkeks.

NB this form is the 221b ficlet, which must contain exactly 221 words; the last word has to begin with b.



Late Arrival




He really doesn't know why Lestrade has to be round here all the time. Can't begin to see what Sherlock sees in him. Definitely an atmosphere between them, something going on, but what?


Showering after his run, John finds himself thinking about Lestrade.


Lestrade lounging in the armchair during the drugs bust, relishing his power, commanding and insolent. Pushing Sherlock's boundaries, pushing for weaknesses. It stops being pretend if they find anything. Is your flat clean? All of it? Baring his forearm to the elbow alongside Sherlock's.


John moans, finds himself becoming erect.


He imagines Lestrade downstairs now, lounging in the armchair again, forcing Sherlock's head down into his lap. Sherlock sucking hungrily on his cock until Lestrade comes with an angry exclamation, pulling Sherlock's hair hard. “Get up,” Lestrade says roughly, and Sherlock does. “Now bend over.” Lestrade pulls Sherlock across his knees, unzips Sherlock's trousers and pulls them down, freeing Sherlock's erection. Lestrade plays with him, teases him as Sherlock sprawls across his lap, all dignity gone, begging for release. “You don't get to come until I say so,” Lestrade rasps.


John's knees are buckling as he leans against the tiled wall of the shower, his soapy hand moving faster and harder on his cock. Comes so hard that he almost blacks out.


Gets it now about Lestrade.




( 17 comments — Leave a comment )
(Deleted comment)
Aug. 24th, 2010 07:55 am (UTC)
thank you! *glomps you back*

ok to post this beyond friends? (i.e. shiftiness levels bearable?)
(Deleted comment)
Aug. 24th, 2010 08:07 am (UTC)
*goes into meltdown*

very glad you like it. will post more widely when I stop laughing about your last comment. *snorts*
(Deleted comment)
Aug. 24th, 2010 08:25 am (UTC)

thank you again for the prompt and the advice!
Aug. 24th, 2010 07:06 pm (UTC)

Aug. 24th, 2010 11:14 pm (UTC)
*beams* so glad you like this! thank you.
Oct. 1st, 2010 02:18 am (UTC)
jfgijgfdlkmnvlz... *goes for cold shower in an attempt to regain coherency*
Oct. 1st, 2010 07:48 am (UTC)
thank you very much! glad you enjoyed it. *grins* the drugs bust armchair pose is a perpetual source of inspiration...
Oct. 1st, 2010 08:39 pm (UTC)
Don't mention showers...

*melts again*
Oct. 1st, 2010 08:43 pm (UTC)

I promise not to mention them for at least another two days... then I may have to. they seem to play a disproportionate part in my fic just now.
Oct. 1st, 2010 08:38 pm (UTC)

Sometimes I think John and is filthy mind are my OTP. Especiallt the way your write him here.
Oct. 1st, 2010 08:41 pm (UTC)
*laughing helplessly*

John and his filthy mind FTW!

thank you VERY much.
Oct. 1st, 2010 10:02 pm (UTC)
Finally he gets it! Heehee!

Delicious! :)
Oct. 1st, 2010 10:06 pm (UTC)
thank you very much! glad you enjoyed it. *grins*
John is a bit slow to catch up, but better late than never...
Nov. 3rd, 2010 05:05 am (UTC)
OH HELL YES! I was afraid you did't like John there, for a moment. gnnn.
Nov. 3rd, 2010 09:48 am (UTC)
ha! glad you liked this. no, I like John a lot (and found him very helpful in writing a 221b pwp).
Nov. 19th, 2010 09:45 pm (UTC)
WOW. I can't believe HOW I had managed to miss this so far!

Ah, John and his filthy mind*!

Did I mention anywhere else that I occasionally fall in love with random words? (ok, not random, words like 'Belatedly')

* place where Lestrade is mostly naked and bossy and major swoon-inducing
Nov. 19th, 2010 09:50 pm (UTC)
thank you very much! so glad you enjoyed it. am very fond of "Belatedly" myself, and enjoyed using it as the punchline to my first 221b and my first pwp.

weirdly, it was much easier to write such a short pwp because it was about someone's masturbation fantasies - and therefore could just be a series of images that didn't need to be filled out in too much detail or with any kind of additional narrative.
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