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fic: Fall (221b ficlet)

Title: Fall
Author: fengirl88
Fandom: BBC Sherlock
Pairing: Sherlock/John
Wordcount: 221
Disclaimer: They're still not mine.
Rating: 15
Summary: h/c, fluff, 221b ficlet
A/N: inspired by a conversation with ginbitch.

 

Fall

 

Ow!” Sherlock’s yell is louder than is strictly necessary.

 

“Stop making such a fuss,” John says. “It’s only a flesh wound.”

 

Which for some reason makes Sherlock giggle idiotically.

 

“Hold still,” John says, sponging carefully to get the grit out. “Honestly, I don’t know why I’m doing this when you’re perfectly capable.”

 

There’s a lot of blood – always is, with knees. And Sherlock’s trousers are ruined.

 

“Can’t get at this properly, you’d better take them off.”

 

No!”

 

Sherlock’s being ridiculous now.

 

“Do it yourself then,” John snaps.

 

Sherlock, looking very uncomfortable, unzips his trousers and pulls them down.

 

Oh,” John says, catching up belatedly.

 

“Rude to stare,” Sherlock mutters, blushing furiously.

 

But difficult, no, impossible, not to. That’s quite an erection.

 

Never seen him undressed before.

 

John’s pretty sure he’s blushing like an idiot as well.

 

There’s a moment where this could go either way and it’s desperately embarrassing. Then John’s hand stretches out as if of its own accord and touches Sherlock’s erection tentatively.

 

They kiss as if it’s just been invented, Sherlock’s grazed hands working frantically to undo John’s clothes, John’s free hand tangling in Sherlock’s hair.

 

John starts giggling.

 

“What?” Sherlock demands suspiciously.

 

“You must be the only man I know who could end up having sex just because you never learned how to ride a bloody bicycle.”

 

 

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turante
Nov. 10th, 2010 08:00 pm (UTC)
awww, that's so cute! (and sexy because anything that contains an undressed Sherlock is)
And Sherlock learning to ride a bike (in London?!) must have been quite a sight. :)
fengirl88
Nov. 10th, 2010 08:02 pm (UTC)
thank you! glad you enjoyed it. yes, I think it probably was quite a sight...
kalypso_v
Nov. 10th, 2010 08:17 pm (UTC)
My sympathies are with Sherlock, for once. Bicycles are dangerous!
fengirl88
Nov. 10th, 2010 08:23 pm (UTC)
mine too - I was so bad at cycling that I gave it up before I did myself or someone else a mischief...
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hobbylobby
Nov. 10th, 2010 08:29 pm (UTC)
SQUEEE
Love this line so much: "They kiss as if it’s just been invented,"
fengirl88
Nov. 10th, 2010 08:32 pm (UTC)
thank you for the SQUEEE! very glad you enjoyed it.
pineapplepeople
Nov. 10th, 2010 08:33 pm (UTC)
I never learned to ride a bike either. Now I'm glad. ;P

This story was so cute and funny! I really, really loved it!
fengirl88
Nov. 10th, 2010 08:34 pm (UTC)
thank you very much! very glad you did.

non-cyclists of the world, you are in good company...
et_cetera55
Nov. 10th, 2010 08:49 pm (UTC)
Awwww - this is lovely :)
And bizarrely I now have the image of grown up Sherlock on a tiny little kiddie bike in my head... !
fengirl88
Nov. 10th, 2010 08:54 pm (UTC)
thank you! *beams*
very glad you liked it.
I think his problems with balance may have wobbled over into the fic from the ice-skating one...
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stupid_drawings
Nov. 10th, 2010 08:54 pm (UTC)
Hahahaha, what a twist!
fengirl88
Nov. 10th, 2010 08:55 pm (UTC)
thank you very much! glad you enjoyed it.
darthhellokitty
Nov. 10th, 2010 09:17 pm (UTC)
“You must be the only man I know who could end up having sex just because you never learned how to ride a bloody bicycle.”

Or, indeed, who could be aroused from banging the hell out of his knees! XD

Really, I suspect it's more because John's there, looking at his knees, thus at that level, and just being all lovely and JOHN. And the whole adrenaline thing from falling off...

“Rude to stare,” Sherlock mutters, blushing furiously.

Sherlock blushing: one of my very favorite things EVER. Especially over nudity.

But difficult, no, impossible, not to. That’s quite an erection.

Love this. Terribly cute: quite an erection! XD

They kiss as if it’s just been invented, Sherlock’s grazed hands working frantically to undo John’s clothes, John’s free hand tangling in Sherlock’s hair.


John starts giggling.


See, I can so picture this. And it's right. :-) Sex is funny in nearly any context, especially this one, even though it isn't a crime scene! :-)

Thanks for this!
fengirl88
Nov. 10th, 2010 09:33 pm (UTC)
thank you very much! *beams* delighted you enjoyed it.

yes, I think it's John's comfort that's getting Sherlock going rather than his own hurt. understandably...
thirdbird_fic
Nov. 10th, 2010 10:07 pm (UTC)
Oh, oh, I so badly want to see Sherlock trying to ride a bicycle now!

AND the rest of it, of course... :D

Super sweet, I love it!
fengirl88
Nov. 10th, 2010 10:10 pm (UTC)
I feel sure you're not the only one... *grins*

thank you very much! so pleased you liked it.
random_nexus
Nov. 10th, 2010 10:11 pm (UTC)
Adored this, it's cute and sweet and just a little hot.
:D
fengirl88
Nov. 10th, 2010 10:13 pm (UTC)
thank you very much! very glad you enjoyed it. *beams*
dominique012
Nov. 10th, 2010 10:33 pm (UTC)
I love them both all blushing and attracted to each other, it's an irresistible image. Love hands tangled in hair too! This was very sweet and hot. Lovely. :)
fengirl88
Nov. 10th, 2010 10:37 pm (UTC)
thank you very much! *glows*

very glad you liked that image of them (I did too, which is probably obvious!).
jbs_teeth
Nov. 10th, 2010 10:51 pm (UTC)
They kiss as if it’s just been invented = wonderful. A lovely little bite, this.
fengirl88
Nov. 10th, 2010 11:01 pm (UTC)
thank you very much! glad you liked it. I enjoy the 221b ficlet form a lot.
nefertina86
Nov. 10th, 2010 11:04 pm (UTC)
Sherlock on a bicycle... he wants to learn to ride on it, because it would make life so much easier for him if he wants to catch a murderer in the city... Hehe, but if it ends like in your lovely little story... I´m sure he´ll never learn it ;)
fengirl88
Nov. 10th, 2010 11:10 pm (UTC)
thank you very much! I suspect he may give up cycling and concentrate on other forms of exercise from now on... *grins*
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pingggg
Nov. 11th, 2010 12:46 am (UTC)
There are not enough giggly Sherlock/John fics! Thank you.
fengirl88
Nov. 11th, 2010 01:03 am (UTC)
thank you very much! glad you enjoyed it. the 221b form seems to suit giggly fics, which is one of the reasons I like playing with it!
2ndskin
Nov. 11th, 2010 03:53 am (UTC)
yay! yay! yay! blushing!Sherlock + blushing!John + the invention of kissing + Sherlock's hair + a surprise "b" word = the perfect fluffy fic! <3 <3 <3
thank you!
fengirl88
Nov. 11th, 2010 11:04 am (UTC)
thank YOU! very pleased you liked it!

*beams*
errantcomment
Nov. 11th, 2010 04:20 am (UTC)
Giggle.
Training wheels are good.
Also, can you imagine him swooping round London on a bike in *that* coat?
Like Batman gone budget...
fengirl88
Nov. 11th, 2010 11:05 am (UTC)
I can, but it really wouldn't be a good idea - the coat probably gets caught in the spokes!

thanks for commenting!
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